Hello tree
Can you see me?
I’m standing right in front of you
I’m very scared and very blue
I ran away from home you see
Really don’t know what’ll become of me
I’m standing here, the lake behind me
If I slip I’ll wrap my arms around thee
I don’t know what I’m going to do
I wish I could live here with you
My mother died and dad remarried
My life has become harried
I really don’t want her in our lives
She’s always hitting me on my behind
Why did my mother have to go
I truly, truly miss her so
A thought just came to me
I’ll go to my grandmother and I’ll see
If she and I can live happily
Thank you, Mr. Tree
I’m so glad you listened to me
I feel much better now, so I’ll let you be
©Susan Zutautas 2019
This poem was written for What Do You See.
I am glad I am not the only one who talks to trees
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Awww. The emotions here are powerful and the execution feels realistic.
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That actually came through. I was hoping someone might see that. Thanks!
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It certainly did! 🙂
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That is beautiful, Susan
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This is so poignant and lovely.
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Thanks so much.
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What a beautiful yet sad event. I love that you wrote as the child speaking to the tree. This is fantastic Susan. Thank you for joining the challenge.
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Thanks so much, so glad you liked it ❤
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My pleasure to read your stories Susan. I just love this little guy. He gives me a big smile.
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