
Engulfed, sight was dimmed
Heavy fog obfuscating
Chilly murkiness
———-
Thick like a pea soup
Squinting, difficult to see
Suspended droplets
© Susan Zutautas 2020
This haiku was written for a challenge over at Fandango’s called #FFFC.
Flash Fiction, Poetry, and Short Stories
Engulfed, sight was dimmed
Heavy fog obfuscating
Chilly murkiness
———-
Thick like a pea soup
Squinting, difficult to see
Suspended droplets
© Susan Zutautas 2020
This haiku was written for a challenge over at Fandango’s called #FFFC.
We experienced fog like that in northern California, it was eerie but beautiful in the sense of shrouded mystery. This is a lovely poem!
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Thanks! Can you imagine going through the Redwoods on a foggy day or even better night 🙂
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Oh these are great and I love the pic 👌
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Thanks so much!
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You’ve about summed that up right
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Thanks!
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🙂
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Two very apt haikus for the image. Well done!
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Thank you so much!
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It’s not every day you see “obfuscating” in a poem or haiku. lol Well done!
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I thought I’d throw that one in 🙂 Thanks, Bill!
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